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Wednesday, April 19, 2006

Writing Fibs

A new form of poetry has taken off the U.S. in the last couple of weeks. Gregory K. Pincus, A Los Angeles screenwriter invited blog readers to send him Fibs* - sixline poems that use a mathematical progression known as the Fibonacci sequence to dictate the number of syllables in each line. The idea spread like wildfire across the internet, and it has been estimated that more than 1,000 Fibs have been posted since the beginning of April.

The New York Times explains:

The Fibonacci progression is a mathematical formula that starts with 0 and 1 and then continues to add numbers that are equal to the sum of the previous two numbers. Thus, the first seven numbers in the sequence are: 0-1-1-2-3-5-8. ... To write a Fib, a more complicated version of the classic, highly constrained haiku, the poet composes a six-line poem that has the correct number of syllables in each line corresponding to each digit in the sequence. (The real first line of each Fib is silence.)

The sequence apparently features in the Da Vinci Code, and shows up in the nautilus shell, knitting patterns and the compositions of Bartok.

Now me, I don't understand maths at all and managed to fail every single maths exam that life ever threw at me (honestly!), but the creative part of one's soul can't resist squeezing itself into self-imposed limits. Here's my very first one.
I
don't
care that
i'm not math
matical, I just
want to write a poem in this form.
Now it's over to you. Compose one or two while the boss isn' t looking and post them up. The best Fibber buys me lunch at a fancy restaurant of their choice.

(*Hmmm. I'm just wondering if a better name for the form might not have been the Pincushion, immortalising its inventor.)

27 comments:

  1. I
    had
    cheesecake
    yesterday
    I savoured each bite
    But now I have put on one pound

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  2. Am being evil since I am here earlier than anyone else at work!

    I
    hate
    my boss
    I wish he
    would develop an
    itch but be unable to scratch

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  3. Moving on ! Sharon I had always loved math being the nerd that I am - now I can't seem to stop - shall speak in fib the whole day today - just to amuse myself!!

    I
    took
    a look
    at my face
    in a new mirror
    and all i saw was my old face

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  4. Sham I like your first one :)
    That's some serious cheesecake!

    I'm going to use the 0 as a integral part of my fib.

    …
    Three
    dots.
    Wordless.
    Now three words
    still meaning nothing.
    Words have no meaning without thought.

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  5. Sadly, Pincushion was taken and sounded too much like I'd be some odd form of voodoo doll!

    Nice fibbing hereabouts. Spot may have the written the best Fib I've seen by a cow!

    Thanks for the link...

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  6. oh my goodness gregory k ... i thought you might google yourself at some point and drop by and am so glad you have ... it must have been very exciting to get your story picked up by the IHT and New York Times ...

    anyway you now can see malaysia about to hit by the bug ... forget sudoku, this is serious!

    sham and spot, delightful efforts ... i know from first hand experience the effects of sham's cheesecake on the waist and bum ... the boss one made me laugh ... and then you guys became more profound ... the space should be used spot, the dots were inventive

    all i can say is MORE, MORE (and i shall enjoy many lunches if i play my cards right!)

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  7. One
    Day
    No one
    Will hear Us
    As We would have banned
    All thoughts words speech women children

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  8. I
    tried
    cutting myself
    but my consciense is
    telling me I can't because
    I have skin of a constipated elephant

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  9. i'd
    love
    to fib -
    it sure beats
    actually working!
    thanks, sharon, for the distraction

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  10. Fibs
    intriguing
    so addictive
    then I released
    my first poem was a failure
    because all I need to do was 0+1+1+2+3+5+8

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  11. Help!
    I
    can't stop
    fib-bing, so please
    help before I turn into
    a frenzied fib-bing foob fib-bing all day long

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  12. Help!
    I
    can't stop
    fib-bing, so please
    help before I turn into
    a frenzied fib-bing fool fib-bing all day long

    Ops, sorry spelling error. You must think I have a lose screw somewhere in the head.

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  13. Some
    time
    in future
    or maybe later
    i will be true and love you too

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  14. A.

    I
    want
    to forget
    everything in life
    and become someone else for good, for me.

    B.

    If
    I
    could have
    only two things
    It would be you and your love forever.

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  15. A
    Shell
    Spirals
    Awkwardly
    As man calculates
    How many syllables? Eight!


    You
    know
    she said
    as she looked
    at my bony knees
    You're sexy when you disagree

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  16. b
    i
    b l
    i o b
    i b u l i
    the blog of a fib-ber and bookaholic

    Ok, I was just fooling around.

    left
    handers
    are creative
    bunch of creatures
    they're so creative that they
    use everything and think directly opposite right handers

    Err...utterly crap this one.

    scrat
    loves
    his nuts
    he loves it
    very very very very much
    i mean very very very very very much

    Tee hee, I have no words..

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  17. A
    Lone
    Lawyer
    thinks aloud
    Nobody listens
    She is their conscience which scares them

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  18. Fi
    bo
    nacci
    was alone
    he's alone and bored
    hence the fibonacci numbers

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  19. A
    Bird
    Lonely
    On A Tree
    Singing With Sadness
    Of Times Gone By Forever


    I don't know if the last line meets the requirements :P

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  20. A
    Swirl
    In Your
    Coffee Cup
    Unwinding into
    Infinity. Now please sup up.

    How fascinating to watch these things go viral. A pity the sestina isn't as contageous as this.

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  21. (silence)
    World
    Cup
    fever
    is coming.
    Must apply leave now,
    Or I'll have to kick my own balls.

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  22. I was wondering how to deal with the zero visitor. "(silence)" is the touch of required genius I think!

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  23. these are so good i'm humbled! some thought provoking, some very personal, and some so very funny (visitor - i nearly coughed up a hairball i was laughing so much)

    animah - the bony knees made me smile and so true about the voices

    dee - you are really having fun with these and getting very inventive - don't forget to count the syllables or you're writing free verse (or a form of poetry of your own!) - not that that's a problem 'cos we're all playing in the sandpit ... who is scrat?

    ms d - the becoming someone else - poignant

    _earth - probably right!

    bawangmerah - yeah last line was only 7 syllables - you could write 'oh those times gone by forever"

    walker - agree about the quality of the silence - i've always felt in music that silence is as important as the written notes and then there's john cage with his ode to silence ... how do you make it felt in a fib? must explore and see what others have done ... loved the coffee cup swirl

    thanks you all so much and keep 'em coming

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  24. oooohhh sorry snowie - yes great distraction ... which reminds me i should actually get something done with my day!

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  25. Difficult to emphasise the silence when it's on the first line isn't it? You're right, it is powerful. The subject of one of my favourite Depeche Mode songs in fact. (Enjoy the Silence.)

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  26. "more than 1,000 Fibs have been posted since the beginning of April."

    Wow, that's a lot of lies :)

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